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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 2008-05-09 07:29 PM



How could you?

How can you see into my heart without a care?
Taking it and making my inmost being become alive…
It’s alive and terrified of all you’ve done,
How could you have done this to me?

How can you see into my soul without a feeling of love?
Those words are all lies you’ve said…
I can’t believe you’ve seen my most retched side,
I can’t believe you’ve done this to me.

I know how you could’ve seen into me,
You didn’t think just did…
And now you pay for these actions,
From all the Hell you’ve put me through.

© Copyright 2008 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
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since 2008-05-13
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1 posted 2008-05-13 07:45 PM


It sounds like you have more to say, like you cut it off too soon. Do you have more to say at the end?
Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 2008-05-14 08:37 PM


I'm not sure whether there will be more. I just wrote this when I was in a horrible mood. But there could be more to come, just have to wait and see.

~*Julianna*~

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