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Dark Poetry #4

Worn Heart

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-04-29 03:11 PM

What lies beyond the war.
Lies the heart of a poor soul
Deep in the ground.
Dead cold.
Memories well forgot.
Beaten down so many times.
Never to beat again
Lays this cold, worn heart
Will it beat again?
Maybe soon.
Maybe never...
Here lies my broken, worn heart.
Never to beat again in the cold ground of my body.
Above all the pain and scars of the Earth
The sunshines warm.
Comfort lies in the skies of hope and freedom
Will this heart beat again..
No one knows

~Zach~

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

1 posted 2008-04-30 02:23 PM

Superb imagery very beautiful in a sad way.

Inspired-8

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-02 08:07 AM

Thanks "I" really appreteate you reading it

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

AAB
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since 2008-04-10

Posts 99
Canada

3 posted 2008-05-06 08:09 PM

Heres hoping it beats again

Good write.

"Death cannot stop true love, all it can do is delay it for a while" The Princess Bride

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2008-05-09 07:25 PM

i think its beautiful in a very twisted way. great job!

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

5 posted 2008-05-10 01:07 AM

great poem, hope your heart will start beating again

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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