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voice2bheard
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0 posted 04-29-2008 01:19 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

He teases me with his smile and grin

but I see the hatred that lies within

I'll be leaving here soon, I keep telling myself

Then why am I always lonely screaming for help

I hate this, I can't stand it, I can't take it anymore

Those icy blue eyes, at a time which I adored

Why do I feel so old, but yet I am very young

So many words I want to say, all at the tip of my tounge

My friends that I have, I feel are slipping away

It seems I lose another, with each passing day

but there not important to me, I keep telling myself

So if there not that important, then why is it them everyday I think of

One walks by me, another in the hall

Our eyes don't meet, we don't say anything at all

Is this my choice or how its suppose to be?

So many things going through my mind, will I ever be free?

I see myself screaming for help

But noones there, I keep telling myself

Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 04-29-2008 01:27 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is about being so confused and you're not sure what to do anymore.  I think about people when I don't want to and I lose concentration. Losing my own life in a way.

Kate

Again
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2 posted 05-23-2008 01:09 AM       View Profile for Again   Email Again   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Again

Voice2bheard, you are a terrific writer. I have read some of your things and they are really brilliant. Keep them coming I want to read more.
midnightdreamer
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3 posted 05-25-2008 08:00 PM       View Profile for midnightdreamer   Email midnightdreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for midnightdreamer

i know what you mean. i always love your poems.

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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4 posted 05-26-2008 11:31 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Wow this is so amazing. I know how you feel.

"Why do I feel so old, but yet I am very young

So many words I want to say, all at the tip of my tounge"

Tha line i love the most. Great work! I love reading your work!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

voice2bheard
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5 posted 05-27-2008 10:32 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thanks you guys I'm really glad you like them and I hope to write more!! I'm going  off to college soon so if I can I will!!

Kate

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6 posted 12-16-2009 04:07 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I SERIOUSLY THINK I'M GOING TO MAKE MYSELF CRY!! I CAN'T BELIEVE I WROTE THIS!!

Kate

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