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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
When did this person I used to love, Become so full of hurt and lies? When did this person I used to know, Make such a good disguise? You’d made so many promises, That you’d never seem to keep You didn’t know all the words you’d said Left me all alone to weep We used to have so much fun Making popcorn and laughing at the colour pink Those times all seemed to vanish As you took drink after drink Waking up in the mornings to get ready for school The last thing I’d feel was glee I remember moving all the cans So my brother wouldn’t have to see All of your choices Made me grow up too fast And just because of you I hardly remember my past Do you know that I ripped up the pictures? And got rid of all our smiles? I couldn’t stand to see the plastic mask You had faked it all the while I know you loved that bottle in your hand, It was clear for all to see I’m just waiting for the answer to come, Did you ever really love me? So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful... |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Amazing Tj! simple amazing.. I know how you feel. I really like this poem. It made such perfect sence. Two thumbs up!! ~Zach~ |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
I really loved this. Enjoyed the read thank you TJ. Love yeah. *-crazycece-* |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
well...I didn't cry this time. At least the tears didn't leave my eyes...but if you ever need to listen to some good memories, I remember some of them. How about all those times she would drive super fast over the bump on ur street while we were listening to Save a horse, Ride a Cowboy (very inapropriate for 10 year olds) and we almost would bumb our heads on the car roof. Or just last year when she got us that limo to ride to the resturaunt and everyone stoped and just stared as we drove by. And that time when you, me, Cole and Brett made up that dace type thing and she watched and laughed with/at us. ...See, I have some of ur memories, and i'll gladly share with you any time. I love you sweetie, {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
this is an amazing poem, my prayers are still with you. JJ |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
You'll manage, and get through this. I know you well enough for that. I'm always here for anything you need. You now my number. Love you. ~*Julianna*~ |
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again.on.death.row New Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 9Canada |
heyy! this is the first poem i've read from you, and i'm definitly gonna read more, because this was excellant! very well put together! |
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