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SATURN
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since 2004-05-04
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ok,us

0 posted 2008-04-24 12:45 PM



lost

as i sit her in my own world i wonder if you ever really loved me or was it all an act. just to get my gard down so you can slither in and crush my self being my hopes and dreams. lost to my own feelings for you can not find the strength to fight you. every time i look at you i get lost in your eyes hoping that you love me just the same. so tell me did you really ever love me or am i lost to you.

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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-04-24 05:07 PM


sad poem but great.

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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