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Dark Poetry #4

Untitled(looking for names)

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

0 posted 2008-04-19 10:43 PM

I once thought
I once believed
I thought that being alive
Was to serve others
To serve you

I thought that I was bad
So I was punished
By being hit

You never respected me
You never treated me real
You said I was a disgrace

All I wanted was
For you to stop
I didn’t fight back
I didn’t feel the need too

Now I see the pain
You gave me
The pain I thought I deserved
Now I see
You just used me
Used me for your little puppet

I didn’t stand
To protect myself
Now I will
I’ll tell you this
Listen carefully
I’ll stand now
Hard as a wall
Like you told me to
I’m not going to
Let you hurt me anymore.
I’m stronger then you are
I’m not a weakling
Not anymore
You reversed it.
Sorry.
“I forgive you,
My best friend”

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-20 12:02 PM

Great write!!!library!

Virtual Abyss
Member

since 2008-04-09

Posts 52
East Coast - USA

2 posted 2008-04-20 03:03 AM

I agree, nice job! Great epiphany.

V/r,

Virtual Abyss

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

3 posted 2008-04-21 05:07 PM

thanks for the comments!!

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-04-22 07:53 PM

very good, i like it very much. As for a title choice...i was thinking somethig like Revers Revenge....or something with revers in it....

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