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Dark Poetry #4

Poem in dream

Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

0 posted 2008-04-17 02:11 AM

Realistic imitations
and simplistic limitations

reality within illusions
no more twisted delusions

open your eyes to these dreams
realize this is more than it seems

No demons before my eyes
thoughts in motion blown out of size

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

1 posted 2008-04-17 07:50 AM

Powerful write unique style.

Inspired-8

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2008-04-18 08:57 PM

nice write!!

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

3 posted 2008-04-18 09:35 PM

very good write!

*-crazycece-*

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