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midnightdreamer
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0 posted 2008-04-15 09:27 PM



You made everyone smile,
When we were blue.
Your smile could run thousands of miles.
Even though you were limited
That didn’t stop you from doing what you did best
Which was to charm us
With your laughter
We were trapped by your spell
We couldn’t brake free
Because you held on forever

Now your gone
You would charm people with that spell
You didn’t even have to try
You would smile
You would laugh
You never did cry

They said you were lucky to have us
Or you needed us
The truth is we needed you more then anything
You would make me laugh
You would make me smile
You were everything

But we all knew
That it would have to come
I hadn’t known you all that long
We want to say
“We love you Jourdan!!
We miss you with all our lives!”

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

© Copyright 2008 Mariah Paige - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-04-16 04:30 PM


aww i deffenetly know how you feel. its hard to go on without a friend. i know how it felt when ever i moved away. but in time you'll heal.

~Zach~



midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-04-16 06:27 PM


yeah. but this poem is on my cousin who passed away about 2 years ago. i didn't write this until last year and wanted to put it on pip but i guess i never got around to it. but thanks!!

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
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at the beach... i wish
3 posted 2008-04-16 10:21 PM


this is sweet, good job

JJ

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
4 posted 2008-04-19 08:19 PM


thanks hiddensmiles!

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
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Swartz Creek, MI
5 posted 2008-05-02 10:22 PM


awww
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