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x-tears-x
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since 2008-04-13
Posts 43
England

0 posted 2008-04-13 05:13 PM


My Brother.

My little brother was,
Giggly, fun, bubbly, rude,
Silly, funny, annoyingly sweet,
Dimples, smiles, addicted to food,
I loved my little brother,
And yes, I still do,
But he’s not my little brother any more,
He’s someone new,

He still has his dimples,
I’m sure of that,
I’ve don’t see them anymore though,
You’ve seen to that,
He cries all the time,
But not of laughter anymore,
He cries all the time,
Because he is so sore,

You scare him, you beat him,
You make him cry,
You want to defeat him,
But you can only try,
Because my little brother,
Has got me,
And I’ve got him,
We will succeed,

You’ll tear us to shreds,
I’m sure of that,
But we’ll sew each other back together,
And we’ll get you back,
We’ll get you back,
For all you’ve done,
Years of terror,
Are just no fun,

My little Brother,
Is eleven years old,
He’s behind at school,
As he’s always told,
My little brother,
Is struggling lots,
But I love him so much,
With Jelly Tots,


Yey.xxx

© Copyright 2008 Becky T. - All Rights Reserved
shattered-smiles
Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows
1 posted 2008-04-13 05:26 PM


I hope that you and your brother will be okay and if you need anything, please feel free to email me.  Welcome to PIP.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2008-04-13 05:26 PM


so sad. i hope everything will get better. Welcome to  PIP.

   {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

x-tears-x
Junior Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 43
England
3 posted 2008-04-13 05:28 PM


thanks everyone.
effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
4 posted 2008-04-13 06:13 PM


Becky, you have my addy & my cell number, use them & do as I said and report that SOB first thing tomorrow...  John
x-tears-x
Junior Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 43
England
5 posted 2008-04-13 06:15 PM


John - thanks so much your the only person whos actually listened to me.
effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
6 posted 2008-04-13 06:28 PM


I am here if you need any help & you have my contact details, USE THEM !! John
Jaki H
Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232
NJ, USA
7 posted 2008-04-13 08:03 PM


oh gosh im sorry! hope everything works out!!!!! i dont want to say that i know what its like cause i dont know all the details but believe me when i say your not alone...
just be strong and keep fighting...


btw, great poem.

x-tears-x
Junior Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 43
England
8 posted 2008-04-13 08:10 PM


thanks so much everyone
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
9 posted 2008-04-14 07:10 PM


gosh my dear sweet Becky... you must get help for you and for your younger brother.. please let John help you if you can't do it yourself.... take good care of you my sweet friend... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
10 posted 2008-04-14 07:27 PM


I know how your brother feels amd how you feel...

I had experience.. if you know what i mean..

My three brothers and I were abused by our father as little children...

I know how it feels to be hurt..

Physically.. Emotionally... and to dispise them but don't hate your parent(s) or guardian..

Hating them only hurts you in the end..

Trust me i know..

If you want to talk.. everyone here would like to help. You can add me on my email.

Talk to people. It only hurts you more if you bottle up your feelings..

I hope you and your brother gets better. =)  


~Zach~



x-tears-x
Junior Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 43
England
11 posted 2008-04-14 07:40 PM


Thanks everyone. And yeah he's ok sometimes like yesterday we went shopping...i like that part of him.
Larrysmom
Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
12 posted 2008-04-14 09:43 PM


Becky, one of my very best friends lives in the UK and she works in the healthcare and she gave me this site to send to you!!! PLEASE USE IT!!! IT IS FREE TO CALL AND THEY WILL HELP YOU AND YOUR BROTHER. I promise!

http://www.childline.org.uk/

Tammy<333

I am going to email this as well!

hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
13 posted 2008-04-14 11:17 PM


you should let someone know, very good poem though, praying for you;;;;;;  JJ

JJ

wisdomofthesword
Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224
the last place on earth
14 posted 2008-04-15 05:28 PM


hope you and your brother are ok, there's always people on pip willing to help/talk, great poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

midnightdreamer
Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
15 posted 2008-04-15 09:16 PM


i'm here if you need someone to talk to as well. i know that feeling sort of. my friends and brother does it to me. but i don't do anything thinking hard that it'll all stop. i wish i had a little sister to take care of instead of a brother.


midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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