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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Ha, now you say that I am at lost of words Well you wrong wrong Today I will show you the innocence you shed The lies that crawl out from under the bed To see a new light and be gone tomorrow The lies you told lead to no sorrow You will take everything in just a few moments My breath, my blood, my words that I speak You will take everything and make me weak But not today I tell you, no there is a new game to play Its called close your eyes and I'll slowly fade away To take everything and give nothing back The innocence you once show'd taken aback The eyes for which the tears run and continue until the run dry You say you want forgiveness, but did you even try? You will take everything in just a few moments but I must warn you there is more I have to say however you don't listen you don't think its okay I'm leaving now and as you take everything I have You won't give a care in the world and you'll say poor thing But when it happens to you it'll mean everything So don't try to fool me either way I'll win As I leave, you'll just be standing there as I take everything Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Hello everyone this poem I wrote right out of the top of my head and sorry if I mispelled anything not sure I wrote this sort of fast. This poem is about being free of someone you spent your life with and you're telling them that they aren't the only ones who get hurt. Kate |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
nice poem. cool meaning. might help me. midnightdreamer black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you glad you like it, haven't written a poem in months i've been really busy. Kate |
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Desirer4New Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art |
very revengeful...good job nice write |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you I'm really glad you guys like it that just keeps me writing more!!Lines 3 and 14 are mispelled a little sorry about that I didn't realize until after I had it posted Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
WOW I FEEL VERY EMO OR I MUST HAVE BEEN BACK THEN!! NOW I'M MUCH DIFFERENT BUT STILL HAVE THE DEPRESSION!! Kate |
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