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voice2bheard
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0 posted 04-11-2008 10:40 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Ha, now you say that I am at lost of words

Well you wrong wrong

Today I will show you the innocence you shed

The lies that crawl out from under the bed

To see a new light and be gone tomorrow

The lies you told lead to no sorrow

You will take everything in just a few moments

My breath, my blood, my words that I speak

You will take everything and make me weak

But not today I tell you, no there is a new game to play

Its called close your eyes and I'll slowly fade away

To take everything and give nothing back

The innocence you once show'd taken aback

The eyes for which the tears run and continue until the run dry

You say you want forgiveness, but did you even try?

You will take everything in just a few moments

but I must warn you there is more I have to say

however you don't listen you don't think its okay

I'm leaving now and as you take everything I have

You won't give a care in the world and you'll say poor thing

But when it happens to you it'll mean everything

So don't try to fool me either way I'll win

As I leave, you'll just be standing there as I take everything



Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 04-11-2008 10:43 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Hello everyone this poem I wrote right out of the top of my head and sorry if I mispelled anything not sure I wrote this sort of fast. This poem is about being free of someone you spent your life with and you're telling them that they aren't the only ones who get hurt.

Kate

midnightdreamer
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2 posted 04-21-2008 05:14 PM       View Profile for midnightdreamer   Email midnightdreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for midnightdreamer

nice poem. cool meaning. might help me.
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

voice2bheard
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3 posted 04-23-2008 08:58 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you glad you like it, haven't written a poem in months i've been really busy.

Kate

Desirer4New
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basketball soccer writting and


4 posted 04-24-2008 09:40 PM       View Profile for Desirer4New   Email Desirer4New   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Desirer4New

very revengeful...good job nice write
voice2bheard
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5 posted 04-28-2008 10:38 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you I'm really glad you guys like it that just keeps me writing more!!Lines 3 and 14 are mispelled a little sorry about that I didn't realize until after I had it posted

Kate

voice2bheard
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6 posted 12-16-2009 04:13 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW I FEEL VERY EMO OR I MUST HAVE BEEN BACK THEN!! NOW I'M MUCH DIFFERENT BUT STILL HAVE THE DEPRESSION!!

Kate

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