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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-04-08 10:13 PM



Just add me to the list
of missery and dismay.
Like the rest of you, my
life ends today. By my
watery field sits my grave
in the grass; dug deep
enough to block out my
past. Though growing are
no flowers in my dying sea
of blood, dryed tears fall
next to me, my dryed
tears of blood.

   {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

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Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
1 posted 2008-04-08 10:48 PM


nice very well writin. two thumbs up!!

~Zach~



Jaki H
Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232
NJ, USA
2 posted 2008-04-13 08:17 PM


ooh i like! last lines a bit confusing but i think i get it now... love it! as always!

x-tears-x
Junior Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 43
England
3 posted 2008-04-13 08:48 PM


wow...thats really deep. Your really good at imagary. i hope your ok...x
Virtual Abyss
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since 2008-04-09
Posts 52
East Coast - USA
4 posted 2008-04-26 12:18 PM


Cool!

V/r,

Virtual Abyss


PAiGEY
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since 2008-05-01
Posts 13
victooriaa
5 posted 2008-05-01 10:27 PM


wow.
really good work

Paige.

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