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PoetsPlay
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since 2007-12-22
Posts 56
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0 posted 2008-04-05 06:40 PM



A cold kiss
A frightened heart
I loved you from the very start,
You took it by force
I was not ready
And you have never been quite steady.
I have been hurt before-
It was someone like you
They had said that they loved me, too
And you know what? I wished it were true
I wished it were true, and it makes me ashamed
A girl like me doesn't fit with a guy like you.

So I will keep myself away
I don't want to be hurt again anyways
Your face will always be with me
The perfect smile and beautiful eyes
I couldn't forget them if I tried
Here is where I say goodbye
Won't see you again-
It would hurt way too much
There for one day
And gone on the morrow
Gone from each day, my life, forever
Not even in death will we be together
So just for one moment,
Just this one night
I close my eyes
And slip into oblivion,
To dream of you,
I close my eyes
And sleep.

Alexandra

© Copyright 2008 Alexandra - All Rights Reserved
jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
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1 posted 2008-04-05 09:54 PM


That was a great write.  You expressed so much how you feel


PoetsPlay
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since 2007-12-22
Posts 56
California
2 posted 2008-04-06 04:54 PM


Thank you for reading it!

Alexandra

Tears-of-Sanity
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since 2007-09-05
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Kingdom Hearts
3 posted 2008-04-07 11:39 PM


nice
Expressive and emotional...

Tears of Sanity~

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