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Dark Poetry #4

Sick in bed

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

0 posted 2008-04-01 11:10 AM

I wrote this poem following the guidelines this
time..................................................................................................

Creepy crawlers on my bed
With a look of hunger that has not been fed
Or is this all in my head?

The room is now spinning
And the creatures are grinning
And my heart is accelerating
My mind and sanity start debating
Am I being misled?
Or is this all in my head?

My soul starts pounding trying to get out
What is going on? What’s this all about?
Crashing hard on the floor outside is the rain
And more creatures make my room their domain
The leader of the pack a woman named Mary Jane
Who kisses me softly driving me insane
But if I continue I will soon be dead
Or should I? Damn I am out of my head

I am sweating and have clammy hands
If I yell out for help will someone understand?
Or will they make me comply with their demands

My throat is drying
And the creatures are now flying
But my cough is slowly dying
I wish I was somewhere else instead
Of being here in bed out of my head
Seeing creatures dressed all in red
Flying around wanting to be fed
Wishing and hoping I would soon be dead
With Mary Jane as the head
And I would have fled
But my vision quickly spread
And tomorrow I won’t believe everything I just said..

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
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1 posted 2008-04-01 07:22 PM

great as always

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Reborn
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since 2008-04-01

Posts 13

2 posted 2008-04-01 07:22 PM

That was pretty good and kinda funny too.

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