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shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
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inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-03-15 10:47 PM


rejection, loneliness and dispair
the wounded emotions of a jaded heart
these contaminated bullets puncture
your once wholesome life
leaving you to die
slowly
severly
while you painfully wonder
how life would've been
without you

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland
1 posted 2008-03-17 06:04 PM


Awe hun, we all think that some days.

     {~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
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2 posted 2008-03-19 12:18 PM


liked it. good job
shattered-smiles
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inside the shadows
3 posted 2008-03-24 05:31 PM


Thanx for the comments.

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

x-tears-x
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since 2008-04-13
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England
4 posted 2008-04-13 08:49 PM


thats really good. really effective. hope your ok! x
shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
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inside the shadows
5 posted 2008-04-13 08:54 PM


x-tears-x, It's sad to say, but I don't really think I'll ever be okay.  Thanx for the comment though.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

midnightdreamer
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Roy,ut
6 posted 2008-04-15 09:19 PM


great poem shattered-smiles.
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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