How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Dark Poetry #4 Archive
 The darkest time, yet to come
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

The darkest time, yet to come

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 10-19-2007
Posts 582
New York


0 posted 03-14-2008 09:28 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Where is the love that I seek for within

How can I be brave, when I've been afraid for so long

Why do you see me in such an abnormal way

I can only live for so long, so please make it worthwhile

I see a light that tells me one day it'll be here for me

In the darkest room I stand stranded all alone

Take me away to a better place where I shall not worry about when to breathe

The blood you shed keeps me at a distance from you

In a lifelong dream I was never sure that you would understand and you never will

The eyes that I look into exceed beyond what I wanted to see

To be able to walk without being called upon for such a drastic matter

To live my life, one day at a time

To have such bad thoughts that will never go away

Stranded, lost, and I'm faded away

Which is what we will all be soon, one day

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 10-19-2007
Posts 582
New York


1 posted 03-14-2008 09:29 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem was a right out of my head poem and I just let me emotions go.

Kate

hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 02-07-2008
Posts 511
at the beach... i wish


2 posted 03-14-2008 08:11 PM       View Profile for hiddensmiles   Email hiddensmiles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hiddensmiles

Nice write!! im just wondering would it be "and i've faded away"?/

Falling rain
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 01-31-2008
Posts 2165
Small town, Illinois


3 posted 03-15-2008 10:05 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Nice, really nice

~Zach~  

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~


voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 10-19-2007
Posts 582
New York


4 posted 03-17-2008 10:23 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thanks and hidden smiles I didn't think about that but thanks!!

Kate

fromme2U
Member
since 11-09-2007
Posts 258


5 posted 03-17-2008 07:08 PM       View Profile for fromme2U   Email fromme2U   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fromme2U

The eyes that I look into exceed beyond what I wanted to see..
WOW NICE WRITE! ESPECIALLY THIS PART
voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 10-19-2007
Posts 582
New York


6 posted 03-18-2008 09:01 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you I'm glad you liked it!

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 10-19-2007
Posts 582
New York


7 posted 12-16-2009 04:17 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW!! I REALLY MISTAKE MYSELF FOR A GOD WRITER!!

Kate

voice2bheard will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Dark Poetry #4 >> The darkest time, yet to come Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors