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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-03-12 06:09 PM


you don't say sorry
you don't say bye
all you say
is i wish you would die

this pain i take in
i can't deny
makes me bleed inside

a blood of immortality
and shame
only time can heal this pain

but as i wait
i am parishing out of this place
and i fall on my face

i'm a disgrace


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shattered-smiles
Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows
1 posted 2008-03-12 07:04 PM


Love this poem.  Resembles me so much.  It's definatly going in my library.

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-03-17 07:00 PM


thank you for your kind words

JJ

shattered-smiles
Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows
3 posted 2008-03-22 05:27 PM


JJ - Jacylyn Janzen...How could you?

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

midnightdreamer
Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
4 posted 2008-04-19 02:21 PM


this kind of goes with me. schol relation.
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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