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When does it hurt?

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 03-12-2008 01:13 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

When does it hurt, when theres a voice inside telling you to go

How do you feel, when theres so many emotions you just want to show

When does it hurt, just take your time and you'll be alright

hold my hand and hold on tight

When does it hurt, when you love someone

but they don't feel the same

Why do we always have who we don't want

and always want who we don't have

When does it hurt, and we have no reson why

it makes no sense that we just breakdown and cry

When does it hurt, how do you feel

a sense when something is wrong, when its real

When does it hurt, when you know you found true love

and you always think to yourself will I be enough

When does it hurt, when you've hurt others for so long

then they leave you and become strong

When does it hurt, how do you feel

You can take my time, I'll make you a deal

If you can tell me when it hurts

I'll keep your secret locked close inside of me

Let all of your anger out and bleed

When does it hurt




Kate
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voice2bheard
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1 posted 03-12-2008 01:20 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is just something that I wrote about my true love and if you're one of my fans of my work then you know who he is...

Kate

wisdomofthesword
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2 posted 03-12-2008 06:30 PM       View Profile for wisdomofthesword   Email wisdomofthesword   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wisdomofthesword

i know how you feel. great write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

fromme2U
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3 posted 03-13-2008 03:54 PM       View Profile for fromme2U   Email fromme2U   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fromme2U

This was really touching. enjoyed a lot
voice2bheard
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4 posted 03-14-2008 08:55 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you guys!! Glad you loved it!!

Kate

voice2bheard
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5 posted 12-16-2009 04:16 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW NOT SURE IF I REMEMBER WRITING THIS?

Kate

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