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0 posted 03-11-2008 01:13 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I need air, I need to breathe

I need to not think of you whenever I bleed

I want to be with you, but I can't

I want to love you, but it hurts

I need to find a way to love you, but not to suffer

We need to find a way to be with each other

You make me feel so alive when you're around me

You give me a sensational feeling you wouldn't believe

My innocence from you was once spilt and now again

Ever since the day we became more than just frinds

I breathe, in the darkest alley of forgivess you can find

I breathe, when I think of you and what you left behind

I hold my last breath safe inside myself when I cry out your name and hear nothing in return

I held my last breath hoping that one day you'll forgive me

I breathe, in the sense that we will be something more

I breathe, from the thought of looking in to those eyes that I adore

I breathe, when your touch surrounds the emptiness in my heart

I breath with everyday for when we are apart

The love you gave me and I in return

The breath of the innocent, lesson learned

Kate

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1 posted 03-11-2008 01:14 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is about Brad Carpenter like always.

Kate
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2 posted 03-11-2008 09:58 PM       View Profile for Jessica   Email Jessica   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jessica's Home Page   View IP for Jessica

Well... I don't know who Brad is but I loved this.  I know exactly how you feel... been there... thanks for expressing it so beautifully.
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3 posted 03-12-2008 10:05 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

wow this is really good!

~Zach~  

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~


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4 posted 03-12-2008 01:02 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

He is the boy I'm in love with.

Kate

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5 posted 12-16-2009 04:20 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW i REALLY LOVED BRAD!! OF COURSE NOW HE'S JUST MY BEST FRIEND

Kate

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