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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2008-03-10 10:45 AM


I cry in my sleep

I can't concentrate in school

I get so stressed out, having to follow all the rules

You say my name softly, try to get me to calm down

I hate it when you're right I wish you were always around

You made me part of who I am today

The words in my head never seem to go away

It seems I have a breakdown now at least once a week

I hate it so much it drives me crazy, to the point where I can't even eat

I wish I was better I wish I could be stronger

and you tell me over and over again that I can

Well then wheres the proof that I can be stronger, I know its time to take a stand

You won't be in my life forever, but right now you are so theres something I have to say

You know how I feel about you, that no matter what I'll love you anyway

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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1 posted 2008-03-10 10:46 AM


This poem is about myself and that I am really stressed out, but at the same time I'm still in love with someone.

Kate

voice2bheard
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2 posted 2009-12-16 04:26 AM


YEA WELL I'M STILL THE SAME! JUST OLDER!!

Kate

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