Making me (Recipe to my heart)

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Dark Poetry #4

Making me (Recipe to my heart)

Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

0 posted 2008-03-07 08:37 AM

The sharpened steel is all I feel
Anger flows and hatred grows
Tearful doubts and silent shouts
Fears stream, darkness gleam

Here’s the recipe that makes my heart
A sundered heart totally torn apart
No more point in hiding my shame
No more is my death just a game
I have seen the errors of my ways
No more waiting or any delays
Forgive my faults and who I am
I am not who you think I am no man

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-03-07 05:57 PM

I really like the way it flows, It's a great poem...infact i might just put it in my library...

great write,

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-03-08 06:57 PM

honestly when i started to read this and you said "steel is the only thing i feel" i was like "oh its another poem about cutting yourself." But then i kept reading on and i was blown away and had a different perspective on this poem.

Thanks for making me think! lol

~Zach~

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