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The_Nameless_One
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0 posted 2008-03-04 11:58 PM


Life is nothing but a dream
I wake up in the shadows
Realizing I want to scream
Awaken me from this reality
It holds no meaning for me
Everything is so surreal
In my insanity
My life is going nowhere
It is getting there fast
Schizophrenic thoughts
Taking over at last
Losing control
My mind is fogged out
I am losing my soul
I have lost
I can not win
My life it seems
Will never begin
Tortureous thoughts fill my mind
Screams echo throughout my skull
Pain has been redefined
It can be mental too
Despair consumes my flesh
Agony wraps around and through
Binding tight like fine wire mesh
So thin and sharp
Very fine
Resembling
Melodies of the harp
Come on now
Truly you have realized
No one can win anyhow
Not in the end
Life does not care
It is cold and harsh
Never fair
All of this is meaningless
Everything is dull and bleak
Desperation I can not suppress
Soon I hope to find bliss
From the one we all fall to
With a frost bitten death kiss


[This message has been edited by The_Nameless_One (03-05-2008 12:03 AM).]

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shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows
1 posted 2008-03-05 09:01 AM


Ohhh, like it like it love it!  I expecially liked the ending!  Great write!  Going in my library!

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

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