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voice2bheard
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0 posted 02-28-2008 10:36 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

The noises I heard, the colors that I saw

I didn't believe it a first, but then I've seen it all

I wasn't sure who it was, but when I knew, I cried

My first thought in my mind was, did she die

It was freezing and snowing, but I didn't care

I went outside to make sure she was still there

When I saw her, I ran, to make sure she was okay

Her words went so fast, she had so much to say

I'm scared, and afraid, now everythings gone

We both stood outside watched the fire for so long

The flames heated our faces, the smoke in the air

Then the trucks and cars tha arrived so fast

Used as much water as they could, so the fire wouldn't last

A candle, it was said, that started it all

Such a big thing that started out small

Her cat named Snow white, that she couldn't find

When they left the house, everything they left behind

I didn't cry until the very next day

I was a loss of words, I didn't know what to say

and now I think after I already said goodbye

I tried so hard not to, but I still cried

Its amazing what a fire, can do to your life

It makes you think alot, makes you even think twice

It took her a while to believe everythings real

and it hurt me inside, because I know how it feels

So many things that could've been worse

She wouldn't be here, or she could be hurt

It made me think that you should treasure everyday

Do what you want and say what you have to say

This event that happend, yes it was real

It happend on February 27, 2008, now tell me, how do you feel?

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 02-28-2008 10:40 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is about my friend dawn her house was set on fire by a candle and her cat is snow white and she lost her cat.

Kate

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2 posted 02-28-2008 02:51 PM       View Profile for firestorm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for firestorm

I am so very sorry-i fight fires-I see the pain and loss-
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3 posted 02-29-2008 12:53 AM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

i hope your friend is doing better. i know how it feels to lose a beloved pet.  
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4 posted 02-29-2008 01:21 AM       View Profile for hiddensmiles   Email hiddensmiles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hiddensmiles

that is so sad...ill be praying

voice2bheard
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5 posted 02-29-2008 08:57 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you guys it was so unexpected and it scared me so much. I haven't seen her since the incident and I hope shes ok.

Kate

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the last place on earth


6 posted 03-04-2008 05:31 AM       View Profile for wisdomofthesword   Email wisdomofthesword   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wisdomofthesword

I hope your friend is doing ok
voice2bheard
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7 posted 03-05-2008 10:25 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I've seen her and shes doing fine,  shes still in school and now shes under the care of the american red cross.

Kate

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8 posted 12-16-2009 04:28 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW I REALLY MISS MY FRIENDS!! HOPE THERE ALL OK!!

Kate

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