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0 posted 2008-02-26 06:03 PM



No one cares, No one see's
Whats that called? *oh yeah* invisablity

No one see's, No one say
Why do I care anyway?

People ignore, they don't see
Whats going on inside of me.

A love burning passion as hot as the sun
Maybe a sesitive guy who wants to have fun?

But that won't happen, they can't see
What can happen, What can be...

People ignore, they don't see
Cause I am invisablity
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Most of the time i feel invisable. And when ever people notice me i dont know what to say so i might say something stupid. but yeah i wrote this when i was supposedly "invisable" or "not noticed". How many of you guys feel like this? i know atleast everyone has felt this once.

~Zach~  



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shattered-smiles
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1 posted 2008-02-26 07:54 PM


This is an really good poem.  It reminds me so much of myself actually.  And yes, most people feel invisible.  I feel like that all the time.  I'm just inivisible cause everyone judges me about my life.  But, enough about my messed up life, good poem!  I hope to hear more from you soon.
TJ

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Mystress May
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2 posted 2008-02-26 09:06 PM


We all have our moments of invisiblity.... sometimes I actually prefer them. good write, doll
midnightdreamer
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3 posted 2008-02-26 09:45 PM


I hate being invisable. though if i had a choice i would rather be invisable rather then being seen. Great poem!!

midnightdreamer

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