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Virginity

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voice2bheard
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I bleieve in hate, I believe in love

I know that sometimes in life its never enough

You want to use your voice, but you don't

You want to scream and shout, but you're quiet

You hide your feelings that you want to show

Theres things about you, that noone knows

A voice in your head that won't go away

When you need to use your own, think of what to say

The tears you hide and the violence you show

A secret about your life that noone knows

The colors you see, red and black

Something about you thats taken back

When the only thing thats rightfully yours

You let it go, its gone, never to return

You think to yourself " Is this what I earned?"

Your virginity gone, lost your pride taken

Your heart that was whole is now breaking

The anger you feel but you don't let it out

The things that you said, when you'd shout

It was mine now its gone, did you ever know

That your virginity is the only thing you have control over in your whole life?

So do what you want but I warn you now

Once its gone, its gone, no reasons how

Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 02-26-2008 10:51 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is suppose to mean that you only have control over one thing in your life thats rightfully yours.

Kate

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2 posted 02-26-2008 12:31 PM       View Profile for r v wooo   Email r v wooo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for r v wooo

an interesting thought...but what if humankind does not have free will. it is apparently a part of our belief systems but have you ever questioned the origins of your beliefs. i was once a total believer in free will but the study of genetics, dna and protein synthesis and an understanding of how proteins impact on controlling  behavior have caused me to think and question.
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3 posted 02-26-2008 01:02 PM       View Profile for r v wooo   Email r v wooo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for r v wooo

me thinks i am an animal.
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4 posted 02-26-2008 03:04 PM       View Profile for Mystress May   Email Mystress May   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystress May

and Kate.... what about rape? that kind of goes with rv's question of free will. if we are not meant to have control over that one aspect, then it will be taken away from us.

the piece is well written, and if free will reigns, then you are absolutely right. our one point of control.
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5 posted 02-26-2008 06:00 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

sometimes yes it does get taken away.. but its more likely that you give yourself away. like you wanted it so you give your virginity away.

thats how i see it. everyone has free will but sometimes there is no other choice.. or well i dont mean choice i mean like the saying "the better of the two evils" i think thats the right saying....
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6 posted 02-27-2008 10:13 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is only suppoes to be about saying that your virginity is the only thing you have complete control over, but once you give it away its gone.

Kate

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YES STILL A VERY POWERFUL PIECE IN MY OPINION

Kate

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