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slimboydim
New Member

since 2008-02-26

Posts 6
Royston Vasey

0 posted 2008-02-26 09:29 AM

Good Afternoon All, this is
my first post to this Forum.
Written a while ago...

All Is Not Well

Intransigent, obstinate doctrine, reeks of despair,
Scriptures in blood, upon rancid flesh.
Cryptic writings, damnation infested with Satan’s Wrath,
Sacrificial rape, bound to Altar of Filth.
Repugnant Sodomite’s repudiate decency,
Strangle life, while executing deviant abhorrence.
Battle rancid stench, diseased schizophrenic thinking,
Wrestle conscience, welcome to death’s, kingdom of hatred.

Justified by revenge, of my own petard,
Surviving protagonist inherits, perfidious Tontine’s spoils.
Plagued by insanity, life’s limitless atrocities,
Nailed to the cross, by deceit and contempt.
Rats scurry beneath, fight over putrid detritus,
Morbid curiosity entices the agitators.
Spit in the face,
Of my lifeless, Hell bound corpse.

Slimboydim.

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

1 posted 2008-02-26 01:07 PM

welcome, hope you relax and stay with us. i'm finding the journey to be interesting.

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

2 posted 2008-02-26 03:09 PM

Hey slim.... I enjoy your style. It has intensity and is causes anxiety (which is a good thing in poetry).

Welcome! I am looking forward to more from you, doll.

slimboydim
New Member

since 2008-02-26

Posts 6
Royston Vasey

3 posted 2008-02-26 05:11 PM

Good Evening Mystress May, R v wooo,
Thank You for the comments and the
Welcome, much appreciated.
Mystress May, that was a first, I've
never been called "Doll" before...

Thank You.

--------------------
Kindest Regards Slim.

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

4 posted 2008-02-26 09:56 PM

I also like your style in writing. wecolme to pip!! Great poem hope to hear more soon!!
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

firestorm
Member

since 2008-02-26

Posts 109

5 posted 2008-02-27 09:20 AM

INTENSE

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

6 posted 2008-02-27 11:04 PM

Welcome and this write is wicked awsome!!!! can't wait to see more!!!

~Zach~

slimboydim
New Member

since 2008-02-26

Posts 6
Royston Vasey

7 posted 2008-02-29 04:17 AM

Good Morning, and Thank You to all.

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