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Mystress May
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0 posted 2008-02-22 08:37 PM



you walk in,
drop to your knees
Crawl to My feet
and worship Me.
So proud am I
of what you’ve become
Building you
with each leather caress.
So proud I am
of what I have done
Creating you…
My perfect pet.

you kneel so still,
need not be bound
A whistle from the crop…
you tense
Leather meets flesh,
you make no sound
In pain you’ve found
your lover’s kiss
Taking pride
in raping you
My phallus forcing
into you

Let go, sweet boy…
enjoy this pain
Below My boot,
where you exist
Sparks from My Wand
across your flesh
Yes, My doll,
you belong to Me
I’ll burn My mark
onto your flesh
For you to savor
in solitude

Shower Me with
adoration
Hand to Me
all control
Give Me trust
as I give you
My little slut
and yet My friend
When you’re weak
lean on Me
Becoming Mine
will set you free

My hand inside
I stretch you wide
The heat of you
envelops Me
Your muscles tense
around My wrist
Open your soul
I’ll set you free
My knuckles hit
induce sensation
you know that you
must hold it in

I give the word
and you explode
Viscous pledge
you belong to Me
My little slut
I’ll set you free
No longer empty
Nor out of balance
We live in
symbiotic harmony

[This message has been edited by Mystress May (02-24-2008 09:53 PM).]

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Mystress May
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1 posted 2008-02-22 08:40 PM


rv.... your earlier comments made me think of this poem that I'd written a short time ago for one of my boys who happens to be my favourite. it isn't very clean but it's raw and honest emotion.

~~~May~~~

Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24
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2 posted 2008-02-23 12:14 PM


Can't get any more honest than that MM.

Nice work, you told everything without telling too much.

Loved it.

Mystress May
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3 posted 2008-02-23 12:42 PM


Thank you Seeker... and yes.... sometimes less is more.
r v wooo
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4 posted 2008-02-23 12:43 PM


goodness, may! you would frighten away a novice with your phallic tool. my only interest is in your verbalistic lashings and a simple burn from your linguistic cigarettes.
Mystress May
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5 posted 2008-02-23 10:25 PM


rv...  I am not at all scary... I can be gentle.... ish hehe

and sometimes my verbal lashings can be much harsher than the sting of a crop


megaskull
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6 posted 2008-02-24 05:20 PM


Some good stuff going on here, I was a little put off by the first stanza "so proud I am"

Have you thought of maybe "So proud am I" or any of the other alternatives, just something about the original bugs me.

The way you depict this scene is very unique, and fun. As I've said, it is very well.

Mystress May
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7 posted 2008-02-24 09:54 PM


Megaskull.... I like your idea and made the change.... you're right, it does sound better! Thanks doll!
r v wooo
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8 posted 2008-02-25 11:17 AM


may, long ago the ancients used "wet leather" bondage as the method of choice in crucifixions. as the wet leather dried, the bonded one would slowly die from aphyxiation. though i love to feel your verbally hot breath lashing against my skin,  i hope the linguistic moisture dripping from the adorable metallic adornments, on you tongue, will keep my leather bindings wet as my breath is being slooowly sucked away.
Mystress May
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9 posted 2008-02-25 01:04 PM


rv.... maintaining wetness is something that I am naturally inclined to do. It not only drips... it completely envelops....

once you are immersed, you either have to learn to breathe it as a fetus would the amniotic fluid of its mother, or you will drown.

r v wooo
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10 posted 2008-02-26 12:57 PM


ooooh! may, you are so pure at heart. you have that ability to grab hold of each moment. you are soooo, firm. if only i had more structure. beat me harder next time. i promise to be a good boy!

[This message has been edited by r v wooo (02-27-2008 08:24 AM).]

Mystress May
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11 posted 2008-02-26 02:36 PM


haha rv.... pure at heart? Me? hehe that does make me giggle! and I give my best beatings to the boys that ARE good.... the ones misbehave get punished with neglect. you seem to be good, thus far
green_itchy_stuff
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New Caney, Tx
12 posted 2008-02-26 10:37 PM


I looked up a few words I didn't yet know and you are a monster inside... geez...

-GIS


Mystress May
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13 posted 2008-02-26 10:58 PM


Craig.... I have my moments hehe....
firestorm
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14 posted 2008-02-26 11:44 PM


I love the intense emotions your poem brought out-can't wait to read more


midnightdreamer
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15 posted 2008-02-27 08:12 AM


great poem!!!!  keep up the good work!!!!!!!

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

green_itchy_stuff
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16 posted 2008-03-31 01:52 PM


Moments are especially good when they come extremely intense and there isn't much time between them...  Then you have motion.

Yeah, I'm showing my signature with every post... lol.


Reborn
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17 posted 2008-04-03 09:18 AM


Wow, that poem was certainly full of surprises.  What an interesting (and bold) way of expressing the thoughts of the quintessential sadist. I wonder what poem the "boy" would come up with in this same situation.
Sir_Vampire
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18 posted 2008-04-17 02:14 AM


I read this while listening to Nine Inch Nails - Head like a hole, and i think the poem and the song coincide rather well, i love this poem, and Mistress i must take my hat off to you and give you a standing ovation, this poem deserves it! Bravo! Can't wait to read more

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

firejerm
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19 posted 2008-07-22 06:47 AM


I appreciated you stopping by and viewing my piece so much that I thought it only fair to do the same.  This is an extremely intense piece of work that isn't for the weak of will or heart.  I truly enjoyed the read it offered, simple yet structured, raw and to the point.  I, too, could relate this to listening to NIN while reading more.  There's a strange sense of sensuality at the end

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

Mystress May
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20 posted 2008-07-22 06:29 PM


Sir Vampire.... that is one of the greatest compliments you could have given me. I'm a huge NIN fan and that does make me happy.

Jeremy.... you're very correct in that it's not for the faint of heart... but that's alright! Much of my poetry has that underlying sensuality. Of course I hoard a lot of it to myself. Some things I just can't bring myself to share. Check out my stuff in 'Behind Closed Doors'   And thank you very much for your kind words.

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