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totallytrue101
New Member

since 2008-02-17

Posts 3
Canada

0 posted 2008-02-21 01:34 AM

You hide away,
Crying alone at night,
Never letting anyone close,
Your afraid you'll hurt them.

Your critisized,
hurt,
beaten on,
you hurt yourself.

You think of suicide,
You think of death,
You wonder,
Would anyone care?

People care,
You don't let them in,
You hide,
Thinking about suicide.

People spread rumours,
Smash you down,
Lie to you,
Hate on you.

People are jealous, angry,
There are people who want you dead,
You think maybe,
You'd be better off dead.

You hide away,
Crying alone at night,
Never letting anyone close,
Your afraid you'll hurt them.

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2008-02-22 06:06 PM

great poem!!!!!! thats how i feel sometimes. i never thought someone was going to write a poem on it. Thats what pip is. Great Poem!!!!!!!!!! welcome to pip. hope to hear more!!!

Midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me showing me, no fear will show.

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

2 posted 2008-03-24 05:39 PM

Amazing, undescribable, it's exactly how I feel. Thankyou for posting this, it's helped me a lot. Awesome write.

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

3 posted 2008-03-25 08:23 AM

many of us have gone through this one time or another..best thing to takes ome time out for yourself and noone else.

Great Poem
V

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

4 posted 2008-03-25 10:24 PM

Very well done and I have felt the same way. Thank you for sharing.

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-03-26 06:17 PM

amazing. i know how you feel!! this is a great poem. i like it!! Keep up the work!

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

6 posted 2008-03-28 12:52 PM

nice write!!

JJ

Desirer4New
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art

7 posted 2008-06-07 11:02 PM

i really relate to this..good write!!!

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