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Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12
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Johannesburg

0 posted 2008-02-21 01:25 AM



The moon rises red this winters eve
The beauty is so pure it can none deceive

The light captivates me, the darkness shrouds me
I am alone on this hill; this beauty is mine alone to see

Below the moon a single star, a crystallized tear
The moon is crying as am I, my tears like the moons are sincere

I feel at home here on this hill, just me and the moon…
Hushed whispers sharing my secrets, knowing it will end all too soon

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

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megaskull
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since 2008-02-04
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1 posted 2008-02-21 02:10 AM


Cool write! Good emotions, good vibrations!
midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-02-22 06:12 PM


Sweet poem!!!!!

Midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

Venus1974
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since 2006-07-15
Posts 79
Tennessee, USA
3 posted 2008-02-22 09:28 PM


Nice

Peace and happiness to us all, Venus

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4 posted 2008-02-22 10:37 PM


awsome poem! keep it up!

~Zach~  



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