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0 posted 2008-01-16 07:52 PM



Memories flash before my eyes
Reminders of a better time
When things were simple
Not a complicated life
I was in control of me.

Now they've taken that away
A puppet is what I play
No control, no happiness
My life is not a fairytale
It is a tragedy.

Happy, laughing face
It is all a lie
Look into my eyes
See the devastation of my life.

Shoulders hunched
I've given up
Eyes of sorrow
A stone of blue
Will tomorrow ever be new?

Alexandra

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wisdomofthesword
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1 posted 2008-01-18 12:35 PM


very well written, I know that feeling

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

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