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Laughed until we cried

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 01-16-2008 01:21 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

He would watch them everyday

Tell them stories, that would never fade away

Go outside and run around

So fast in circles til they fell to the ground

He didn't ask a question why

So he laughed until he cried

Sitting in a room all alone

Hears there voices over the phone

No matter how hard he'd try

Still they would laugh until they cried

Days go by one by one

He never thought he'd be so proud of his son

Getting older and losing touch

He knew for sure he gave him enough

Then one day he came back to visit him

Told him all the stories and places hes been

He told him my how the days go by

He remembers we laughed until we cried

A quiet room everyone gathers around

A tragic loss, but love still found

His son speaks about his fathers life

As remembers we laughed until we cried


Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 01-16-2008 01:22 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is fiction about trying to live your life the best you can that its okay to  smile and have a good time once in a while, but to enjoy it because it soon will be over

Kate

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2 posted 01-18-2008 12:33 AM       View Profile for wisdomofthesword   Email wisdomofthesword   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wisdomofthesword

I love it

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

voice2bheard
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3 posted 01-18-2008 01:10 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you
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4 posted 01-21-2008 05:24 PM       View Profile for fromme2U   Email fromme2U   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fromme2U

wow very nice write!
voice2bheard
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5 posted 03-11-2008 01:30 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you glad you enjoyed it!

Kate

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6 posted 12-16-2009 04:24 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

A STORY ABOUT A SONG I THINK ?

Kate

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