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Dark Poetry #4

a girl had died

hardcorexflirt
Junior Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 12
WI, USA

0 posted 2008-01-14 10:22 PM

1,000 tears
drowned hearts light,
evil smiling,
in his pride,
he broke her heart,
he broke it quick,
he stabbed it with a frozen stick
heart of glass, a girl has died.
broken with his selfish pride

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

1 posted 2008-01-14 11:29 PM

Quality read, loved it.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

2 posted 2008-01-16 10:31 AM

Not bad for starting out, reminds me of a poem I was just reading the other day about a knife and a wound, don't ask how it just does anyway well enjoyed!

Kate

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