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Dark Poetry #4

Beautiful liar

hardcorexflirt
Junior Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 12
WI, USA

0 posted 2008-01-12 08:13 PM

I was blinded by your smile
convinced into your lies
you were inside my broken heart
and behind my wasteful tears

you walked from all my problems
and ran with other girls
you told me looks are everything
but now i know your wrong

now i feel that your not worth it
i hope that you with see
beautiful liar,
thats all you are to me

i dont ever think youll care
of everything i say
so i put a fence around my heart
just to keep you far away

from here i stand away from you
thats where ill always be
because beautiful liar,
thats all you are to me

[This message has been edited by hardcorexflirt (01-12-2008 10:59 PM).]

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

1 posted 2008-01-12 08:32 PM

As you don't like people to Critique, I shall say this.

It's a good poem, there are a few areas but I'll leave at that.. ;-)

Nice read.

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