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Today is the day

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 01-11-2008 09:30 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Today is the day, to tell someone how you feel

Today is the day, that someone I care about is leaving

Today is the day, I got accepted to college, now I don't know how to afford it

Today is the day, another child was born, and another person died

Today is the day, I use my voice and speak out among others

Today is the day, that noone will put me down

Today is the day, you read this and tell me what you think

Today is the day, the day after yesterday

Today is the day, we open our hearts and try something new

Today is the day, we eat, then starve tomorrow

Today is the day, that our troops are still over seas

Today is the day, someone got married, and someone divorced

Today is the day, we will look pass all of our wrong doings

Today is the day, someone found a cure for aids

Today is the day, that our president is black or even a women

Today is the day, when for once we don't have to worry

Today is the day, you tell me your story

Today is the day, you realize you need to start living the best you can

Today is the day, today no, right now

Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 01-11-2008 09:32 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I hope someone relates to this and gets the meaning of this poem really my quote of " live every day likes its your last, because before you know it it'll be gone.

Kate

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2 posted 01-11-2008 01:00 PM       View Profile for dragoon   Email dragoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dragoon

I thought it was a good modern topic and the message was clear. I think you may have used a different way of the line : day after yesterday. It gets used a lot. Maybe try something different that means the same thing there. dragoon
voice2bheard
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3 posted 01-11-2008 01:07 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you for your honesty whether its good or bad as long as you tell how you interpret the poem its fine

Kate

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4 posted 12-16-2009 04:49 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

YES AND STILL IT CONTINUES ON!!

Kate

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