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The Black Rose

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 01-10-2008 10:54 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Silence, nothing is to be heard but the wind

Silence, your voice is a whisper not to be heard

In a land far away layed a dream

that can only be imagined, never seen

There was a garden filled with may flowers

but one stood out above all

The Black Rose, in the mist of several others

While every other one, bright cheery red

The Black Rose stood in the center, as if dead

For what would bring about this weary flower

as if it loss hope, happiness, no power

Maybe its a sign, death or danger

Someones maybe come about, a frightening stranger

Why The Black Rose is there silent and still

noone knows,,or if its something killed

The Black Rose, however isn't for all to see

Very few have seen it, several don't believe

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 01-10-2008 10:56 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is very deep hopefully someone can relate. Its about trying to be different unique, shows that not every part of your life can be as happy as you want it to be.

Kate

Seeker72
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since 02-24-2007
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2 posted 01-10-2008 11:17 AM       View Profile for Seeker72   Email Seeker72   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seeker72

There are sections I can relate to.

Very good poem.
voice2bheard
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3 posted 01-10-2008 01:05 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you

Kate

surrealpoetics
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4 posted 01-13-2008 06:19 PM       View Profile for surrealpoetics   Email surrealpoetics   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for surrealpoetics

i really love this work, it truly touched me, right here (*points to the heart) where it counts. i shall be watching your works with great interest...

~Valdron


Je suis de mon coeur le vampire,
— Un de ces grands abandonnés
Au rire éternel condamnés
Et qui ne peuvent plus sourire!
— Charles Baudelaire
voice2bheard
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5 posted 01-14-2008 10:30 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you glad to know that I have a fan of my work, I try my best and everything written is honest and comes from the heart

Kate

PoetsPlay
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6 posted 01-16-2008 07:53 PM       View Profile for PoetsPlay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetsPlay

I really like this! Great!

Alexandra

wisdomofthesword
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the last place on earth


7 posted 01-17-2008 09:06 AM       View Profile for wisdomofthesword   Email wisdomofthesword   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wisdomofthesword

i really like this and can relate

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

voice2bheard
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8 posted 01-18-2008 01:19 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you glad you relate

Kate

XxForever.BrokenxX
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9 posted 01-23-2008 09:16 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

hahaha sounds like me!! it's verry capturing, it gets ur attention! good job!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

voice2bheard
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10 posted 01-28-2008 09:03 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Glad you can relate

Kate

midnightdreamer
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11 posted 02-05-2008 11:34 PM       View Profile for midnightdreamer   Email midnightdreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for midnightdreamer

yes this me again. yes this poem relate to me...........a lot beause i'm different form everyone else it's just that when your different like me and you go to a school like mine with very rude boys and girls then maybe it's better that your not different. But i can't change who i'm and i wouldn't want to. i love your poems.
midnightdreamer

voice2bheard
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12 posted 02-08-2008 10:51 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you I'm really glad you like them midnight dreamer!!

Kate

effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity


13 posted 02-08-2008 01:43 PM       View Profile for effjayel   Email effjayel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for effjayel

Kind of like the Sasquatch or Loch Ness Monster, but I believe and I see it.....

John
Mystress May
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14 posted 02-20-2008 11:23 PM       View Profile for Mystress May   Email Mystress May   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystress May

Kate.... another fabulous work.

voice2bheard
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15 posted 02-24-2008 09:52 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

thank u mystress may your one of my biggest fans i see.

Kate

voice2bheard
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16 posted 12-16-2009 04:35 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW YEA I LOVE IT STILL!

Kate

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