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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2008-01-10 01:01 AM



I know it hurts
But its passing
I found what I was looking for
My face is bleeding
Pain is massaging my finger

Light drizzle
Dry honesty
Solid bones
And this voice
A whisper in my mind
The pills are weak
Lies staple a mask elegantly

As nothing I breath
I'm working to dig the core
Blind spirits
Lemon souls
-----------------------
(Go Away...)

provisionite lower and fill
this soul in my cup
powerful by law
in truth and eternity
everlong bosom
unreachable pits
My heart resembles that of a vampire
I only want life through
My cemetery where
I am alone

planks in my eyes
swing much too fast
and their damage is real

Jesus

while my soul and spirit desperately
cry out
to remove fallen teeth of that beast

truth
you stand
beautifully
mighty
sword drawn
to fight
and win
bleeding
undead

Keep your pants on, Jesus loves you

© Copyright 2008 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Twilight Warrior
Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106
The World That Never Was
1 posted 2008-01-10 04:19 AM


My heart resembles that of a vampire
I only want life through
My cemetery where
I am alone

I wish I would've made up this line. Good work GIS. -TW

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

dragoon
Junior Member
since 2008-01-09
Posts 19

2 posted 2008-01-10 04:09 PM


I've never seen a poem quite like this one.I thought it was  interesting how you placed it together. good work. dragoon
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