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The life of a teenager

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 01-08-2008 11:03 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

The life of a teenager is difficult

They make mistakes, go through problems and deal with so many different encounters

In high school it can be very hard

Several are still trying to figure out who they are

Theres the jocks and the cheerleaders

The punks and the skaters, the stuck ups, the haters

Then theres those who serveral don't know about

Think its easy trying to figure them out?

Of course its not, but we still try

Teenagers go through several things-

Puberty, relationships, emotions they never knew

trying their best, making mistakes, to name a few

They want to fit in, they want to feel welcome

Theres several things they don't tell you, and why?

Some never know?

Maybe its because there afraid?

They don't tell you because its not cool

You can't be around there friends, because you're a fool

The life of a teenager can be very depressing

If you don't think so parents, just try to ask them

The life of a teenager has its ups and downs

The life of a teenager can't be seen all around

So the next time when you want to "talk"

Be careful how you say it, or approach them

You don't want to lose your child

Just think back to when you were younger

How did you feel, did you want to talk to your parents

Just remember the life of a teenager, you'll never forget it

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 01-08-2008 11:04 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Hopefully someone can realate to this topic, it was hard but I made it through

Kate

Treagal
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2 posted 01-08-2008 11:16 AM       View Profile for Treagal   Email Treagal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Treagal

Very, very true. I liked it a lot.

"Theres several things they don't tell you, and why?

Some never know?"

I find this to be the chord that struck me the most, as it feels like this same question played out through my mind when I was in the situation.

I enjoyed it ^^, keep it up!
voice2bheard
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3 posted 01-09-2008 09:08 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you well to be honest I don't have any children myself but I know what its like being a teenager

Kate

Kahlil
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4 posted 01-09-2008 09:15 AM       View Profile for Kahlil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kahlil

You are so right, v2bh, the teenage years are a very tender age.  This is the stressful time when there are way too many things to figure out. I haven't forgotten, and I still struggle with certain issues, even though I'm old enough to have a 13-year-old granddaughter.
I really appreciate your poem.  Well expressed.   ~K
voice2bheard
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5 posted 01-10-2008 10:35 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you I'm really glad to hear that and good luck to your granddaughter I can only imagine everything shes going through right now. Hope all goes well!

Kate

Im not a poet and i no it
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Soo true, teenage years is prob the most hardest to understand and go through...very nice piece ♥
tonyV
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7 posted 01-15-2008 04:55 PM       View Profile for tonyV   Email tonyV   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tonyV

I can easily relate to this, as I am also a teenager.

A vivid poem indeed.
hardcorexflirt
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8 posted 01-15-2008 06:23 PM       View Profile for hardcorexflirt   Email hardcorexflirt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hardcorexflirt

wow...i can definetly relate to this.

loved it alot...
voice2bheard
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9 posted 01-16-2008 10:29 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I'm really glad you guys could relate to this considering of course I am also a teenager going into my last 2 years as one

Kate

Jaki H
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10 posted 01-20-2008 11:36 AM       View Profile for Jaki H   Email Jaki H   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jaki H

oh G-d i wish i could get my parents to read this! even if they did, they would never listen to you... great poem! so true! so true....
voice2bheard
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11 posted 12-16-2009 04:45 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

YES I WROTE THIS AND NOW I'M GOING TO BE 20 IN 2 MONTHS!! LOL NO TEENAGER NO MORE!!

Kate

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