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SxcBabyEyes16
New Member

since 2008-01-06

Posts 1
Australia

0 posted 2008-01-06 05:02 AM

when you get bitten
your inner vampire comes out to play
you start to feel the hunger
and you burn up during the day

What have you become ?
a monster of the night,
drinking those dear to you
and bleeding them dry

Sarah was your lover and
nows shes dead, you killed
her love and layed her to rest

You became immortal, you can not die
living a life of lonely times
you wait and wait for you prey
biting there necks and return at bay

But now you forget that hunting is a sport
and then you hear a knock at the door
for those who were lost that can never
be found, were missed and now the people
ARE HUNTING YOU DOWN

hey everyone im new here and thats my poem and i hope u like it

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2008-01-09 04:20 AM

Very cool. I feel like this could go on....

hehe.. You can try and hunt down a vampire, but odds are you will be getting your ass handed to you as they are much stronger, smarter, and quicker... but they make excellent lovers!

Just keep a muzzle on them in the sac and dont cook them anything with garlic in it.. that will tick them off lol

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!! <3 <3

It is an honor to be your first replier!!!

I hope you find the blue pages to be home.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2008-01-09 11:27 PM

omg i loved it!!! vapires are tight!!!!

it needed a little work but for the most part, it was great

hope u write some more

o n WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2008-01-10 01:18 AM

Moderator, please delete this reply.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2008-01-10 01:19 AM

I am a vampire. Blood gives new life. Bleeding releases death.

Welcome to pip.

Everything in your poem is exactly as you say. You must be a perceiver...

God bless,

-In Christ,

Jesus loves you

Keep your pants on, Jesus loves you

surrealpoetics
Junior Member

since 2008-01-13

Posts 13
Spokane, Washington

5 posted 2008-01-13 05:45 PM

i liked it, very cute

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

6 posted 2008-01-16 07:45 PM

It's good! I like vampires (or vampire stories) myself. You might want to look over your spelling, though. Welcome to pip!

Alexandra

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

7 posted 2008-01-22 09:40 PM

have u read Twilight by Stephenie Meyer?? thats about Vampires!! and i luve it with all my heart...ok not that much but it's awesome. anyway good write! hahahah

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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