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Dark Poetry #4

Holder of Tears

KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2008-01-03 02:53 PM

I will hold your tears,

When you need to cry.

I will spread your tears,

To thoose who need to cry.

I will give your gift away.

Then maybe I will be allowed to die,

Because maybe you will hold my tears.

Holder of Tears,

Hold my tears.

Holder of Tears,

Spread my tears,

Of a lifetime.

Holder of Tears,

Give my life,

My tears,

To a new life.

The_Nameless_One
Member

since 2007-01-20

Posts 165
Missouri

1 posted 2008-01-03 06:27 PM

welcome to PiP nice first post you need to correct your misspelling thoose before it's too late i.e. 24 hrs. I liked this it's good for a first post here is my first post /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=103&topic=000338 see if you like it

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

2 posted 2008-01-04 10:35 AM

This was pretty good and since its your first here I think its really good

Kate

dragoon
Junior Member

since 2008-01-09

Posts 19

3 posted 2008-01-09 07:52 PM

I second that.

Twilight Warrior
Member

since 2007-02-22

Posts 106
The World That Never Was

4 posted 2008-01-09 09:20 PM

Spreading tears...an interesting topic. Nice first post. Hope to hear more from you.
-TW

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-01-22 09:01 PM

Good job! I can't make perfect sence of it yet but it will come to me.

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