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voice2bheard
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* This poem is right out of my head hope you like it*

The waiting past has come today

To forget my dreams from yesterday

To move along above and beyond

To let out my voice thats been in for so long

I live and wait just to see your face

The thoughts of redemption, I have no place

For its in my heart you deeply lie

The song once heard, a lullaby

The breath you took, when I looked in your eyes

The tears that came, I started to cry

I'm so confused and feel all alone

Will I ever find a place I can call home

You kept me awake, you kept me there

Now everywhere I turn I'm followed by a stare

To hear your voice, the slightest song

That was once heard, now gone

I'm getting older and I have to understand

I have to do this on my own, take a stand

Now that you're gona and I'm still here

I will live for today and not in fear

For a few last words that has to be said

I love you, my life, and my words in my head

All I want is a chance to be heard

and now that you hear me, its your turn

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 01-03-2008 09:33 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem literally was out of the top of my head just made it up as I went along I hope someone enjoys this one I actually did.  Really I guess just what I have to say

Kate

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2 posted 01-04-2008 11:32 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

In line 20 its suppose to say "gone" I'm so sorry, but hope you enjoy!

Kate

midnightdreamer
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3 posted 02-06-2008 08:51 AM       View Profile for midnightdreamer   Email midnightdreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for midnightdreamer

i didn't even notice. Great poem though.

Midnihgtdreamer

voice2bheard
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4 posted 02-06-2008 10:37 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you!!

Kate

voice2bheard
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5 posted 02-06-2008 10:44 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you very much!!

Kate

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            Excellant Touching

fromme2U
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This was a gooood one!! great job.
voice2bheard
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8 posted 02-08-2008 10:35 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you guys I'm really glad you like my poems, gives me a great feeling inside!

Kate

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You did a good job Kate, I enjoyed it very much, don't beat yourself up OK? if you like it & are happy with it, that will encourage you to write more as I hope will the response you deserve and get....

John
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10 posted 12-16-2009 04:40 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

lol yea I do like my poems a lot!! too bad I haven't  gotten them published huh?

Kate

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