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PoetsPlay
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since 2007-12-22
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0 posted 2007-12-23 01:10 AM



When I close my eyes
And the visions are gone
I see a nothingness-
It goes on and on
Does it mean I don't feel?
Or that I'll die soon
And there's no changing fate
Except once in a blue moon?
Maybe it means there's decisions ahead
A new path ready to be found.

Alexandra

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Tears-of-Sanity
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since 2007-09-05
Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts
1 posted 2007-12-23 08:29 AM


Nice
your nothingness is not really nothing!  I hope they are jst about making decisions, and nothing else! that was good...

Thank you for sharing!

Tears of Sanity~

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