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moondogz
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Great White North

0 posted 2007-12-19 09:45 PM


I'm not sure if this is "kosher" but /pip/Forum101/HTML/001646.html here's a link to a very powerful poem in another forum....sorry if it's a problem.
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penguin5
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1 posted 2007-12-19 10:09 PM


Thanks, I posted it in this section.  Minor changes in the spacing that were left out origionally.  
moondogz
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2 posted 2007-12-19 10:33 PM


only problem is I think u r only allowed to post a poem once unless you post again in critical analysis..my mistake for the confusion...guess they'll have to spank me...
penguin5
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3 posted 2007-12-19 10:39 PM


if someone could delete "retreat" from teen poetry, i agree that this is a better place for it.  I dont have the power to delete threads.
moondogz
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4 posted 2007-12-19 11:37 PM


maybe the mods can help...btw, welcome to pip talk.
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