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voice2bheard
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0 posted 12-19-2007 10:51 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I want you to see yourself through my eyes

then you'll know how I feel, why when I see you I cry

I want you to speak the words, I have to say

to understand what I'm going through, with you I'm not okay

I want you to feel, like the way I feel around you

every inch of emotion, every moment is true

If only you could see yourself through my eyes

you'd know how I feel, and then you'd finally recognize

I want you to understand, that I can't let you go

at least not now, theres so much you should know

I felt this way for a long period of time

and everynight I would pray, that you would be mine

I want you to know how I feel

that how I feel for you is real


Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 12-19-2007 11:00 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is about someone I like alot and saying that I want him to see himself the way I do, and how I feel etc.

Kate

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2 posted 12-21-2007 06:54 AM       View Profile for wisdomofthesword   Email wisdomofthesword   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wisdomofthesword

nice write

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

voice2bheard
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3 posted 12-16-2009 04:55 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

THANKS! ALWAYS BE TRUE!!

Kate

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