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voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-12-18 01:18 PM

How could you let her walk all over you

how could you let her say things, you knew were never true

how could you let her, throw you around

she does whatever she wants, walks on you like ground

how could you let her hurt people you love most

and you do nothing, you just let her bost

you know I can't stand her, I never will

the way she treats us, the pain kills

how could you still be with her, when you deserve better

how could you do this when our family should be forever

how could you do this to me

you know how I feel about her

what I don't want her to be

how could you let me down

I'm family and I don't want her to be around

how could you when all I asked for

was to see her, nevermore

Kate

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

1 posted 2007-12-18 06:26 PM

so much anger in this poem, good job.

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2007-12-19 04:00 AM

i used to have thughts like this all the time. great poem

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2007-12-19 09:02 AM

Thank you I love to write about things that have happend in my life my way of expressing myself

Kate

jonasbabii916
New Member

since 2007-12-13

Posts 3

4 posted 2007-12-19 09:12 AM

Kate that is so good...I could never write that good.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

5 posted 2007-12-19 10:32 AM

thank you again jonasbabii!! I truely wrote this poem out of my strongest emotions and feelings

Kate

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

6 posted 2007-12-20 08:10 PM

wonderful! The emotion radiates from the words.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

7 posted 2008-01-02 10:59 AM

Thank you again!! Have to have emotion to have a poem at least thats what I think

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

8 posted 2009-12-16 04:50 AM

YEA I REALLY HATE MY DAD'S GIRLFRIEND!! SHE DID RUIN MY LIFE!! SHE'S THE REASON I'M NOT IN COLLEGE ANYMORE!!

Kate

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