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voice2bheard
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0 posted 12-18-2007 01:18 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

How could you let her walk all over you

how could you let her say things, you knew were never true

how could you let her, throw you around

she does whatever she wants, walks on you like ground

how could you let her hurt people you love most

and you do nothing, you just let her bost

you know I can't stand her, I never will

the way she treats us, the pain kills

how could you still be with her, when you deserve better

how could you do this when our family should be forever

how could you do this to me

you know how I feel about her

what I don't want her to be

how could you let me down

I'm family and I don't want her to be around

how could you when all I asked for

was to see her, nevermore

Kate

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fromme2U
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1 posted 12-18-2007 06:26 PM       View Profile for fromme2U   Email fromme2U   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fromme2U

so much anger in this poem, good job.
wisdomofthesword
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2 posted 12-19-2007 04:00 AM       View Profile for wisdomofthesword   Email wisdomofthesword   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wisdomofthesword

i used to have thughts like this all the time. great poem

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

voice2bheard
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3 posted 12-19-2007 09:02 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you I love to write about things that have happend in my life my way of expressing myself

Kate

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4 posted 12-19-2007 09:12 AM       View Profile for jonasbabii916   Email jonasbabii916   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for jonasbabii916

Kate that is so good...I could never write that good.
voice2bheard
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5 posted 12-19-2007 10:32 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

thank you again jonasbabii!! I truely wrote this poem out of my strongest emotions and feelings

Kate

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6 posted 12-20-2007 08:10 PM       View Profile for eternally_singing   Email eternally_singing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eternally_singing

wonderful! The emotion radiates from the words.
voice2bheard
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Thank you again!! Have to have emotion to have a poem at least thats what I think

Kate

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8 posted 12-16-2009 04:50 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

YEA I REALLY HATE MY DAD'S GIRLFRIEND!! SHE DID RUIN MY LIFE!! SHE'S THE REASON I'M NOT IN COLLEGE ANYMORE!!

Kate

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