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Sorrow sins

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 12-13-2007 01:31 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

A voice that lies deep within

saved me from my sorrow sins

the light that shined from up above

gave someone hope, that they will be loved

to cry the tears that left you alone

someone cries out softly I want to go home

to have one last look, feeling or touch

through all the times, never enough

an indescribeable feeling you felt

when only you and noone else

to just go on and leave everything behind

its nothing you won't feel through your mind

so as I  leave and cry within

save me from my sorrow sins


Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 12-14-2007 11:09 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is about letting go trying to move on

Kate

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the last place on earth


2 posted 12-18-2007 02:01 AM       View Profile for wisdomofthesword   Email wisdomofthesword   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wisdomofthesword

the meanings subtle yet clear at the same I love it

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

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3 posted 12-18-2007 06:51 PM       View Profile for fromme2U   Email fromme2U   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fromme2U

I can sooo relate. nice write
voice2bheard
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4 posted 12-20-2007 10:31 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

thank you very much

Kate

voice2bheard
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5 posted 12-16-2009 04:56 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I DO STILL LOVE THIS POEM!!

Kate

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