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A Brad Carpenter

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I never thought this day would come

but I guess it already has, its already done

it seems its really true

what goes around comes around

and it'll happen to you

my story however, isn't a game

what I'm about to tell you, everythings the same

you see there was this boy I fell in love with

the way I treated him, I never knew this

I would be upset, sad, mad and cry

everyday and noone knew why

he really got sick of the way I was

the way I am, wasn't good enough

and he was right, I was wrong

but my mistakes I've made, made me strong

now in my life someone else has feelings for me

just like I did with him, but now I see

the boy I loved I hurt real bad

now someone who likes me, is making me sad

he gets me confused, annoyed and stressed out

just like with the boy I loved, no question or doubt

the thoughts in my mind and how I'm so unsure

I guess everyone in their life can be a

Brad Carpenter

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This poem is about a a guy I loved but now theres another persoin in my life who likes me but i don't feel the same way and were pretty much going through the same thing that " Brad Carpenter" and I went through except now hes treating me the way I treated " Brad Carpenter" I know confusing but sad

Kate

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YEA MY BEST FRIEND

Kate

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