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vnessaluvsu
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since 2007-12-10
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0 posted 2007-12-11 07:06 PM



im gonna draw a picture
a picture with a twist
ill draw it with a razor blade
ill draw it on my wrist

yes i kno this one is very short

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moondogz
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since 2007-05-01
Posts 397
Great White North
1 posted 2007-12-12 01:04 AM


i like the poem, but the implications are kind of scary...maybe that's the whole point...anyway thanks for sharing your pain.
vnessaluvsu
New Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 6

2 posted 2007-12-14 07:39 PM


no my friend wrote that one she told me to put it on idk why but who care i guess she likes it
fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

3 posted 2008-01-21 04:26 PM


Damn this was deep although it was short but it was deep.. I liked it.
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
4 posted 2008-02-02 02:12 PM


When you actually think about it, it is very deep. You have to try adn picture the words in your head as a real life thing happening on paper...wait does that make sence??

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows
5 posted 2008-02-02 04:47 PM


Um, I've seen this quote from another website.  I'm not accusing you of anything, just saying that I've seen it before.
TJ

[&] she's a blood broken rose

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