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vnessaluvsu
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0 posted 2007-12-10 06:29 PM


forget his name
forget his face
forget his kiss
his warm embrace
forget the love that you once knew
remember he has someone new
forget him when they played your song
remember when you cried all night long
forget how close you once were
remember he has choosen her
forget how you memorized his walk
forget the way he used to talk
forget the things he used to say
remember he has gone away
forget his laugh forget his grin
forget the dimples on his chin
forget the way he held you tight
remember hes with her tonite
forget the time that went so fast
forget the love that was it's past
forget he said he'd leave you never
remember he is gone forever

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-12-11 09:39 AM


Welcome to this ever growing circle of poets and friends~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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voice2bheard
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2 posted 2007-12-11 10:56 AM


Wow this opem is very strong and I can relate I loved it great work!! Maybe you could read some of mine if you like??

Kate

voice2bheard
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3 posted 2007-12-11 10:57 AM


sry ment to say poem lol

Kate

vnessaluvsu
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4 posted 2007-12-11 06:45 PM


o thnx every body u guys are nice
rockbabe
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5 posted 2007-12-12 09:46 AM


I really needed to read this right about now. Going through some bad vibes. And this helped. Great write! I applaud you for the vivid show of emotion.
voice2bheard
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6 posted 2007-12-13 11:36 AM


I ca relate a lot also thats why its a loved poem

Kate

eternally_singing
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7 posted 2007-12-20 11:22 PM


Very well written.
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8 posted 2007-12-22 01:56 AM


Wow I rarely ever come in to dark but I saw your poem liked the title read it... and wow you really made me remember a lot of stuff I don't know whether i should thank you or not:P but great poem hunn. and Welcome To Passions.
Krysti

fromme2U
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9 posted 2008-01-21 04:24 PM


Wow this was a great poem! I also loved the one you did in spanish..great job!
XxForever.BrokenxX
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10 posted 2008-01-22 09:35 PM


this could ba an amazing song to! nto that it's not awesome enough as a poem but...u know. Keep up the awesome writing! (wow i sure and liking the word awesome today)

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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