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A B
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since 2007-12-09
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0 posted 2007-12-09 01:59 AM


M A

Schism

By schism rent asunder
By relentless flutter
When whispers softly thunder
When cutting voices utter

There Inner fire lies
There hates rise

If I sigh
Then shale you cry?
If you lie
Then who am I?

I am anger and you
the liar.


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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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1 posted 2007-12-13 11:40 AM


I liked the words but was a little confused

Kate

The_Nameless_One
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2 posted 2007-12-15 04:39 PM


nice use of language

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