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A tingle in my mind

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 12-06-2007 01:20 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard


you look at everything just one last time

little did you know you were always mine

now I'm leaving far away from here

as you tell me not to go, crying tears

you turn around and give me one last look

little did I know that was all it took

you came back to me without a care in the world

told me forever I'd be your girl

but then it came to me that you wouldn't be there

I wonder to, did you even care?

I looked at you in sorrow in shame

You just thought it was only a game

I was worried in fear

and for that many tears

I never want to be broken again

I promise this will be the last time

that you ever- give me a tingle in my mind

Kate

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 12-06-2007 01:22 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is about feeling that you want to let go forget about you never want them anymore but there still there.

Kate

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2 posted 12-06-2007 02:04 PM       View Profile for Mystress May   Email Mystress May   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystress May

'Tingle in my mine' is the perfect description of that feeling! I enjoyed this one.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
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3 posted 12-10-2007 01:25 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thanks hun!!

Kate

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4 posted 12-16-2009 04:59 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

GOD I WAS SO IN LOVE!! LOL

Kate

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