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Dark Poetry #4

A tingle in my mind

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-12-06 01:20 PM

you look at everything just one last time

little did you know you were always mine

now I'm leaving far away from here

as you tell me not to go, crying tears

you turn around and give me one last look

little did I know that was all it took

you came back to me without a care in the world

told me forever I'd be your girl

but then it came to me that you wouldn't be there

I wonder to, did you even care?

I looked at you in sorrow in shame

You just thought it was only a game

I was worried in fear

and for that many tears

I never want to be broken again

I promise this will be the last time

that you ever- give me a tingle in my mind

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2007-12-06 01:22 PM

This poem is about feeling that you want to let go forget about you never want them anymore but there still there.

Kate

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

2 posted 2007-12-06 02:04 PM

'Tingle in my mine' is the perfect description of that feeling! I enjoyed this one.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2007-12-10 01:25 PM

Thanks hun!!

Kate

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2009-12-16 04:59 AM

GOD I WAS SO IN LOVE!! LOL

Kate

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