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voice2bheard
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New York


0 posted 12-05-2007 09:15 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

You make me laugh, you make me smile

everything you do, you make it worthwhile

whenever I'm sad, you'd look in my eyes

you'd say my name once, and say don't cry

I love it when you're there

when you're with me, I know you care

no matter how many times I would deny

you'd tell me to do my best and just try

the sound of your voice, tingles down my spine

to know your my best friend, your there, all mine

how is it possible to feel such love

when sometimes inside, I feel I never give enough

your touch was so sweet

and your love is so pure

and yet everything you do, always seems sure

when you're happy

inside I'm happy too

although I may not show it

I care so much about you

I don't wantyou to leave

I don't want you to go

I just thought that I should tell you

I just wanted to let you know

no matter how many bad times we come to

I'll always love you so

Kate

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Mystress May
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since 10-25-2007
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Taunton, MA


1 posted 12-06-2007 07:01 AM       View Profile for Mystress May   Email Mystress May   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystress May

Good morning doll! I really love this one. The rhyming pattern changed halfway through which threw me off but it's well written.

~~~May~~~

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
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2 posted 12-06-2007 10:59 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

well its about my best friend i know but it was really personal

Kate

voice2bheard
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3 posted 12-16-2009 05:00 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

YEA THIS IS STILL TRUE!! I GUESS!! MY BFF!

Kate

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